[SHADOW] Batcall (WIP)

She was given the prefix Bat- as a kit, due to her midnight black fur, sharp hearing, and pristine yellow eyes which are slightly lacking in sight- though she is not blind, she was given the last name call because she is very softly spoken and rarely speaks to most cats.

» A stocky black she cat with a quarter of her tail and piercing yellow eyes.

This is a rather interesting looking female to say the least. She is built very small, but she is not lithe. Her powerful muscles are clearly evident under her slightly fluffy fur. Her head is very delicately built, creating smooth lines from her mouth to her nose, and the moving on to her eyes. Batcall has quite brilliant eyes, they are wide and circular shaped, and very large. Though these eyes do little to her vision, which is less than up to par for a standard warrior, however she is not blind. Her eyes are colored a sharp and even tone of yellow. When you see most cat's eyes they have different patterns of different tones of the color of their eyes, this female does not. The yellow in some ways can be slightly eerie to most cats though she does not mind at all what other cats think about the way her eyes look, the better to scare them off. Her poor sight has not become a hindrance to her ability as a warrior, however, her two large black ears sit evenly on either side of her head, sharpened over time of practice so she can hear a mouse scuttling through the underbrush several rabbit-lengths. After her ears comes her neck, which for her build is muscular, however not lacking grace. Her shoulders are slightly bulky, but not too bulky for a she-cat. In her mind that would be unnecessary, all you would do all day is stomp about the brush and make so much noise it would be deafening for the prey that you were hunting. Her legs are sturdy and thick, her paws are large for the season that she morbidly loves the most-leafbare. She looks like she was built to be out in the snow working her hardest to keep her clan fed while the other cats with much smaller and spindly paws- like her sister- stayed back at camp. Her hind-quarters are muscular and unwavering, and her hind legs are mirror images in build to her front legs. The interesting part of this female is when you get to her tail- well were a tail used to be. Now there is maybe a quarter of a normal-sized tail, and a large poof of long black fur, it almost seems that she should have been renamed due to her lack of tail after her apprenticeship, however she had not accepted her leader's want to change her name. Her pelt that that or a normal looking warrior. Somewhat of a normal mid-length, however not short-furred. Her actual fur is one solid ton of black, black as night. This black color was also a reason of which she received her prefix of Bat.

at least 150 well thought out words describing this cat's personality. there should be no perfect characters - i want to see at least one thing that's negative about him or her.

positive:
» Loyal
» Fierce
» Good-humored (on a good day)
» Intuitive

negative:
» Unstable
» Paranoid
» Insecure
» Self-loathing

fears:
» fear one
» fear two
» fear three
» fear four (minimum)

» Spiderpelt - Sister


at least 85 words for kits, 150 words for apprentices, 200 words for warriors and queens, 250 words for senior warriors and elders, 300 words for deputies and medicine cats, 400 words for leaders, and 175 words for everything else. the typical thing to do is to split it up into paragraphs for each rank they've held.